TimberTykes
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Hello, Esandyii!
First things first, I really enjoy your voice. Very nice and rustic, in my opinion.
In ‘Knee,’ I think the read was very to the point, although I feel that since it’s the topic of the narration and therefore pops up more often, ‘Partial Knee Replacement’ could do with more variance. Also, it seems like some words were running together, but that could just be me. I also like the way you said ‘particular,’ for some reason.
I like ‘A-fib’ much more! I heard more variance here, but I would probably elevate the first ‘ventricles’ and ‘also.’
Great reads, and thank you for allowing me to listen to them!
Hello, lmzawarski!
I thought that this was a very well done read! The read was clear and concise, with proper emphasis and variance where needed. The pacing was pretty accurate, also.
I didn’t think there was a big problem with pops, though I couldn’t help but to hear a lot of mouth sounds while listening. Maybe your mouth was dry during the recording? It happens to me a lot. Regardless, great work!
Good Morning!
I have a couple of recordings today! Feedback of any kind is much appreciated.
I really hope I’m doing right in the way of avoiding pauses- I’ve been taking time to make sure I don’t wait too long in-between sentences.
Either way, thanks in advance, and enjoy your day!
Hey! Really appreciate the feedback! It seems that I’m still missing the point on fixing my pauses, even when I think I’ve figured it out. If it’s not too much trouble, could you give me a few examples in my recording, to help me onto the right track?
Good Evening!
Here’s a recording as homework, per instructor.
There’s a massive heatwave going on in my area, and I noticed that I just couldn’t keep my mouth from drying out. It’s hardly noticeable in the recording, but I do plan on re-doing this when the weather cools down.
As for the aim, it was primarily for someone who’s taking a break from their usual game. I hope the feeling wasn’t lost here.
As usual, any critiques, feedback, and comments of any kind are much appreciated!
Good Evening!
Working on yet another recording. I have a feeling I’ve done this one already, but… I like DQ, and my birthday’s next week, so hey, lol.
I don’t have a specific focus tonight, other than the usual- beginning/middle/end, conversational feeling (I kinda have the feeling that the ending doesn’t mesh well with this, but merely my opinion), etc.
Feedback and criticisms of any kind are greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance!
Hello! I really enjoy your voice! It’s comes off as sincere, and it really helps sell the ‘Aetna,’ and even the ‘Password-Reset’ recording flow-wise.
I really enjoyed the recordings, but I think the items you’re selling within the recordings could do with a little inflection- it helps us figure out what we’re supposed to be paying attention to! Also, with ‘Great style, great value…,’ try finding different ways to say ‘great,’ to keep things interesting.
Good Evening!
I have another recording today. I wanted to record two times today, but there’s a lot of commotion outside. With that, the quality of this one may be a little… eh, so apologies in advance.
I’m trying to balance my cadence here, making sure my lines don’t sound too similar to another one, but I have a feeling I’m not quite getting it. If you have any feedback, it’s well appreciated!
Thanks for your input! I hadn’t realized that I would end up being repetitive in that way. I’ll make sure to keep this in mind in the future as I record.
