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Hi All,
Here’s two more commercial practice reads. I welcome any and all feedback! Thanks in advance.
Hey Talia, loved your voice on both reads, as they both sound very welcoming and engaging throughout. I was expecting the documentary to sound a little more low energy than the explainer, but the way you read it also sounded phenomenal.
The only thing that stood out to me as odd was in the explainer read. Toward the end, it sounded like there was an awkward pause between “Select the” and “Add a new account…”
Hi Everyone,
I’m working on my Commercial reads and would love any and all feedback! Thank you!
Both scripts below are from the EDGE library
Hey Alexcharles! I thought your tone sounded very conversational and less like you’re reading from a script. I aslo appreciated the technique in which you’re approaching the read (almost like a documentary narrator)
There were two things I noticed as I was listening:
1) the word “nitrogen” seemed very rushed (or it could’ve been clipped in the recording
2) The read sounded very even keel through the entire script. Try playing with giving a few phrases different emotions or slightly changing the pace based on a certain phraseHi Elena! Great reads. I’m actually a bit jealous of your diction and pronunciation. You have a great voice for healthcare advertising.
I would second solin232 on the recording feedback. It just sounded a bit “airy” which is most likely do room you’re recording in. It didn’t distract too much, but I’m sure it’s making your voice sound slightly different.
Hi all, hope you all had a wonderful thankgsiving!
Here are two more practice reads where I’m trying to focus on reading slower/enunciating better. Any and all feedback is welcomed. Thanks in advance
Hey Aemanimate, you’re very good with verbose/wordy sentences. I listened to the medical narration first, which I thought was great, and then the N**i second, and though “there are so many words here”. You’re able to cleary enunciate each word effortlessly, which is definitely a challenge I have.
Hey Nikka Kowidge! Despite the note re: production quality, I still think it’s great in these two reads. I liked your pace in both reads, as slowing down is something I’m working on in mine. What I found especially interesting is the different tone in both reads without having to “project” differently into the microphone. I often find that I try to project too much instead of just letting the mic do its job.
Thanks for sharing
