[Taylor Grissom]

Great job on these takes Ibby! For Kim Crawford: Your voice sounds super warm and comforting. I also think you had some good variety in pitch which helped keep my attention. When you say “…or our time” it sounds like you’re pronouncing “our” as “are” if that makes sense. I know we often pronounce it as “are” in conversation, but I’ve been directed to try to say it more like “hour”.

For Zillow: I like the pacing of this one! When you say “fees” I heard you pitch up at the end and it almost made it sound like a question. Maybe try a take where you sound a little more certain in your tone about what you’re saying.

[Taylor Grissom]

Hi all! Happy New Year! Would love any non-technical feedback you’d be willing to provide on these commercial reads for Chime and Nickelodeon Hotels. Thank you so much for your help!

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[Taylor Grissom]

Hi there! This is my first time posting to the feedback forum and I’d love to hear your critiques on my Canva and American Express commercial reads. My recording space is not fully set up yet, so please only provide voice-related feedback. Let me know if these sound conversational and any other feedback you may have. Thank you so much 🙂

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