[T Hayes]

Thank you for the feedback Daniel! I appreciate the note on mouth clicks. I am pretty new to all of this so, I am still training my ears and learning what I need to listen for in my recordings. I am sure I am probably not hydrated enough. Much appreciated!!

[T Hayes]

Talia- I really loved your reads of both of these! Your tone and pacing were on-point. Struggling to find something to work on, but if I were to give one suggestion your tone for the corporate explainer was maybe a little too peppy. But I am probably reaching a bit. Great job! 🙂

[T Hayes]

Very new to all of this. Any feedback is wanted and appreciated. Thank you ahead of time.

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[T Hayes]

Thanks for the feedback! The points you made were actually some things I thought about as I relistened to it. The falling intonation at the end specifically. Good luck to you on this journey. I will be on the lookout for some of your postings to give some feedback. 🙂

[T Hayes]

Luke V – On each of your three recordings, I think you did a nice job of changing your tone and delivery to appropriately fit the expected audience. My one area of feedback would be to make sure to emphasize the “t” sound at the end of words. I was sometimes not able to hear that sound.

[T Hayes]

This is my very first share on the forum. I would appreciate any feedback! Thank you so much !!

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[T Hayes]

I thought this sounded very good! I liked your tone and the pace was appropriate. My one suggestion for improvement is the introduction sounded a little choppy and a tad bit too slow.

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