T Hayes

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    T Hayes
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    This is my very first share on the forum. I would appreciate any feedback! Thank you so much !!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #85062
    T Hayes
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    I thought this sounded very good! I liked your tone and the pace was appropriate. My one suggestion for improvement is the introduction sounded a little choppy and a tad bit too slow.

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