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Hi Kim, My only feedback, I believe in the sentence. “And alot of you… “you” sounded like “ya” and your pace picked up a bit at the end. Just a little slower, all in all..nice read!
Thank you so much touzet for this great feedback! Much appreciated. Will definitely work on all you mentioned.
Hi Ilene, Nice job on the reads. My feedback on Maybelline, is to emphasize more on the brand. The pace was a little quick in the beginning and end “New Moisture Lipstick… I I also Agree with Provocaleric on the Popeye in really asking the question in the beginning. Sesame Street was fun. Just right for you! Overall very nice.
Hello Everyone, Looking for some feedback on homework scripts below. As always much appreciated!
Blue From American Express
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Kid’s Explorer Academy
In his work at the Explorer Academy, a 12-year-old embarks on a global hunt for a secret formula that could reveal his hidden past.
Plunged into a world of critical missions and code breaking, it might be difficult—especially when he doesn’t know who he can trust.Hello Everyone, Looking for feedback on my practice scripts below. As always, very much appreciated.
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Hi, your voice is great!
Enjoyed the AMEX read a lot. The Sales-training was a bit rushed, slow down a bit. All in all.. great reads. Keep up the good work.
Hello Everyone, I would love to get your feedback on my homework practice scripts below. Much appreciated as always!
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