[suecat]

Hey Everybody,
Today I’m trying out my new mic and new studio – closet. Please take a listen and please know that all comments and suggestions are a real help!
Thank you

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[suecat]

Hey Erica, both reads were great. I thought the Kaye could have show just a ‘tad’ more excitement since I could save 60%. The tempo, and tone were on point. Your voice is warm and inviting. and I enjoyed listening. Keep it up!

[suecat]

Hey Tim,
Thank you, thank you, thank you! I’m so glad you said that about my ‘s’ I feel the very same way! I’m working on getting out of the bowl — And I honestly appreciate your critique! A really BIG help!

[suecat]

Hey Rogue, Thank you for your feedback and you’re probably right about the ‘artheritis’ as I am a country girl. I’ll be mindful of that slip, in addition to paying closer attention to my speed. And those are not minor – as I just lost that job! Thanks!

[suecat]

Hey Everybody,
Looking for your suggestions, critiques, and any tips you’d like to share — Thanks

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[suecat]

Hey Rogue, You sound like a natural. Your voice is smooth and conversational. Once again, you knocked it out the park! Great performance!

[suecat]

Hey Jay- Your deep, smooth voice, is a good fit for narration. Your performance was captivating. I’m from SC, listening to you, made me want to visit Congaree Nat’l Park – AGAIN! Keep it up!

[suecat]

Hey Alaya, You have a nice smooth voice. One thing I noticed were your pauses, that can make your performance sound choppy. On the first read I thought your ending was kinda abrupt – I don’t know if that’s a good thing or not, but it left me waiting for more. Your tone, pace and volume were spot-on! Keep it up!

[suecat]

Hey Rogue, I thought both reads were conversational, but the first read was a little sassy, and fun to hear. Both flowed nicely. Great work – keep ’em coming!

[suecat]

Hey Rogue, The first read sounded like you tired, like you weren’t “funk-free.” But that second one, was bright, and stimulating. The pace was good, and it felt like you were talking to me. I believed you were “funk-free.” Keep it up!

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