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  • in reply to: Feedback Forum #66809
    SteveVO
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    Thanks for any feedback on this script:
    I’d like to welcome you to one of the wonders of the world: the National Gallery of Art. This is one of the most significant and extensive art collections in the world, exhibiting various masterpieces and the only painting by Leonardo found on American soil. The gallery was founded on the initiative of a former United States Secretary of the Treasury, Andrew Mellon. Mellon donated his collection of 121 works of art to the country, which include “St. George and the Dragon” by Raphael and “The Annunciation” by Jan van Eyck, as well as five Rembrandts and several paintings by Titian, in the conviction that other collectors would also be encouraged to do so. Many followed his example and today the gallery has almost 7,500 works that range from Byzantine art to modern day pieces, including, among others, the masterpieces of Leonardo, Vermeer, El Greco, Turner, Monet, van Gogh and Picasso. In the upcoming audio files, I’ll take you on a tour of their works.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #66086
    SteveVO
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    I’d welcome any feedback on this narration.
    Thanks,
    Steve

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #62285
    SteveVO
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    A more corporate read. Two takes, one more friendly, the other more “tough.”

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #62280
    SteveVO
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    Haven’t done a real estate read before, so this is a first. Appreciate any thoughts.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #62279
    SteveVO
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    On the medical read, you were aiming for warmth, variation in tone and avoiding a tendency toward monotone. To me, you hit it on all three points. I thought those, in addition to the pacing, were spot on.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #62201
    SteveVO
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    Would welcome any feedback on this e-learning script.
    Thanks,
    Steve

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