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Hi Logan I liked the first one best. I am not an expert but thought that sounded more natural. Only feedback is maybe less pronunciation on the word taste. Nice job!

[slemay]

Being a newbie too I thought it sounded really natural and believable. I would make the last two sentences more like the beginning of your read. Sounds great!

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Thanks so much for both of your feedback posts. MUCH appreciated.

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I am new at this but I would try to make it more of a conversation and drive more of the questioning of what is this place? I hope that makes sense.

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I liked the bread read but the last time you say bread it sounded like you were holding your breath. It sounded more natural in the rest of it.

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I really liked the 4h read. You sounded believable and your voice is very calming but with enthusiasm. Thanks for sharing.

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Lindsay I thought your pronunciation was great on the Advance Technologies read and you had a warm friendly tone. I am very new at this but felt the connection to the read.

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Elise I thought your energy was really good on the Space camp read and you made me want to visit the location with your enthusiasm.

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Ok, this is my first time doing this so would love to get some feedback. I did it off my phone so its not going to be the best recording. I would love to hear any advice on speed, clarity, etc. THANKS!

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#78110 Elise I thought your energy was really good on the Space camp read and you made me want to visit the location with your enthusiasm.

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