[slemay]

Thanks so much I slowed it down and like it better! 🙂

Also, I really liked your Revlon read. The AMEX one was good as well I just felt like you needed to vary the read a bit. The end sounded more natural.

[slemay]

Thanks so much I slowed it down and like it better! 🙂

[slemay]

My coach gave me direction to vary the way I say repeating words so on your “who would you be’ maybe try to make it a bit different each time?

[slemay]

Great thanks so much and I will listen back!

[slemay]

I liked the Bowflex and thought your energy was good. I liked the variation you used in the last half of the read when you were explaining instructions. You mixed it up a bit and that felt more natural. Nice job!

[slemay]

Maybe try to go a bit slower and or softer to give your audience the feeling you really care. But your voice sounds nice!

[slemay]

I loved the Connecticut lottery read especially in the beginning because I really believed you won with the fun I heard in your voice if that makes sense. 🙂

[slemay]

Ok, still rusty but would love any feedback. Again, doing this on my phone so don’t need technical advice. THANKS!!!

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I think these all sounded great but for some reason Suave was my favorite. Great job!

[slemay]

Ok, I am still a little rusty but curious to see how this sounds to anyone that wants to comment. Just a quick recording on my phone so no technical feedback necessary. THANKS!!!

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