Hi, I would love to get some feedback on this read, any feedback would be appreciated.
Thanks in advance!
Steve
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Hi Elena, Great job! I liked both of your reads! I enjoyed your tone, the pacing, your diction! The only things I hear are issues with the recorings, like sibilance and you may need a treated space to get a better quality recording (Volume was fine) I’m far from an engineer but these things jumped right out at me! Thanks for encluding copys of the scripts! Hope to hear you again soon!
Best of luck!
Steve
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Hi everyone, I’m submitting something for ongoing training and would appreciate any feedback, thanks
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Hi twstark, I love the tone of your voice and thought your pacing and diction on the Allstate Insurance read was very good, I didn’t notice anything negative on either read except the Viking River Cruise was cut off towards the end, nice job!
Hi, I enjoyed both of your reads ! didn’t notice anything negative that stands out to me. I thought your pacing was good and you kept me engaged through both reads, great job!
Hi, This is some practice for an up coming coaching session, Any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks for listening!
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