[Andrea]

Hi Mary,

I like your warm voice. I think the first recording sounds more inviting than the second one, probably because of the background audio. If you go with the second background audio, I think there should be a bit more energy in the delivery. But I’m new to this, so I might be wrong 🙂
In both recordings, I would contrast “here” and “there” more.

[Andrea]

Hi everyone,

Here’s another homework practice script. I’m on a narration track and would appreciate any feedback on performance (I don’t have all my studio stuff yet).

Thanks for your help!

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[Andrea]

Hi Mary,

I liked the first read. Maybe you could give equal weight to “last” and “cup” like you did in the other reads.
It didn’t sound too loud to me. On the contrary, I had the impression that the first sentence in #2 and #3 was more silent than the rest.
Nice work!

Andrea

[Andrea]

Hi everyone,

Here’s my post again, with the right file type this time. This is my first homework assignment. I would love to hear your feedback on the quality of my read and my neutral English. My studio is not fully set up yet, so the acoustics might not be great. Thanks for your help!

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[Andrea]

Hi everyone,

This is my first homework assignment. I would love to hear your feedback on the quality of my read and my neutral English. My studio is not fully set up yet, so the acoustics might not be great. Thanks for your help!

What exactly goes into candy to make it so sweet and yummy? Join Professor Hoody on a fantastic journey to find out how candy is really made. In Making Candy, the professor’s quantum transporter sends him to a real chocolate factory to explore the candy world. You can just taste the excitement in this candy-coated adventure.

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[Andrea]

Loved it! I really liked the way you changed tones to create different images. Well done!

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