[Silver Wit]

I enjoyed your Tilex read, but I feel like you could’ve added a bit more annoyance or disgust in the beginning. The mildew is GROSS and I think a little emphasis on that would help.

[Silver Wit]

Hello all! I have some recordings for my second commercial assignment that I’d love some feedback on. (part 3)

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Hello all! I have some recordings for my second commercial assignment that I’d love some feedback on. (Part 2)

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Hello all! I have some recordings for my second commercial assignment that I’d love some feedback on.

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[Silver Wit]

I just want to start by saying, I think your voice is PERFECT for medical narration. However, I feel like you should work on your clarity in the “knee replacement” read. I heard a bit of muddled lines that kinda blurred together. But it was still an enjoyable listen.

[Silver Wit]

Great read, but I have to agree that you should have fun with the Sesame read. Tap into your inner child and let the good times roll.

[Silver Wit]

You have a great voice, but I feel like you’re taking a few too many long pauses for your lego land read. I agree with the “lead-in” strategy, it’s something I need to remind myself of too.

[Silver Wit]

Sounds good to me, I think your tempo is a little slow at first, but it still matched the feel of the ad.

[Silver Wit]

I liked your waterpik read, though I feel like you could up the tempo in the beginning and the end of the commercial. The tempo in the middle sounded perfect to me.

[Silver Wit]

Perhaps it’s because I’m still training my ear, but both of these performances were spot on in my book.

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