[Silver Wit]

You’ve got a great voice, but I feel like you could’ve put a bit more emotion behind your Mountain America read. Your voice sounds warm, but I wanted to feel warm, if that makes sense.

[Silver Wit]

Love your voice, but I feel like you’re rushing through the script. Your celeb read was good, but I’d say slow down a little and give the material a pause every now and then.

[Silver Wit]

I’d say my biggest bit of feedback would be to use a bit more pauses in your read. You know the material well, just give it some room to breath

[Silver Wit]

Great voice, and great Nike read. I feel that you could pick up the pace a little in the first half of your newmans read, because the second half of that is spot on.

[Silver Wit]

I could really feel the emotion for your Betterhelp read. though I think you should speak a little louder on your Pillsbury read or get a little closer to your mic.

[Silver Wit]

No notes I can think of. Voice very warm with a dash of wisdom. I could feel the emotion from you in both of your reads.

[Silver Wit]

Aside from the echo, I really liked your read of the Jif peanut butter ad. Really sounded like a dad that wanted the best for his kids.

[Silver Wit]

I feel like you should believe in the product you’re trying to sell. It sound more like you’re reading the product and not selling it.

[Silver Wit]

Really had the feel of a commercial. You got this dude!

[Silver Wit]

I like your Bombay Sapphire read, had just the right level of sass. I really got the vibe of “You don’t drink Bombay? Where have YOU been?”

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