[Shmuel]

Pretty good. Perfect casting by the way. Audio is spot on. A couple of truly minor quibbles: I might consider varying the energy a bit here and there. It’s high throughout the whole vid. OK, it’s for gamers, and that’s the way they are, but after a couple of minutes I found myself kind of zoning out, and you don’t want that. Dunno, maybe it’s me (I’m not a gamer). Another thing, but this regards the directing: telling about an example of edge play, then pulling back and showing how it’s done *with your voice silent*. Your voice is there all the time, so if it goes silent for a few moments, I think it would actually draw attention. But this is all subjective, don’t forget. Again, great job in general.

[Shmuel]

Thanks, Jas

[Shmuel]

As usual, great job. Diction is on the mark, sound is flawless. Big O Tires nailed it. The Home Theatre – I would add some irony to the acting, I didn’t quite hear it. Hey, normally home entertainment systems are so complicated, you need a grandson to work it ! A brain surgeon just won’t cut it! (d’ja get it?) Or something like that. Also, some of the music background sounded a bit arbitrary, although YMMV on that one.

[Shmuel]

Thanks, Yesche

[Shmuel]

Try them again with more energy.

[Shmuel]

I like the Advil read. Can you get me some Advil? You sound like you really are the expert on it. 😉

[Shmuel]

This is an add for Royal Bank Canadian – Avion. Only the VO part, which is designed to be accopanied by various visuals. Here is the text:
VO: Most of life, isn’t like this.

VO: It doesn’t look like this.

VO: Taste like this.

VO: Or sound, like this.

VO: And when was the last time… you felt like this?

VO: Special moments like these are far from the everyday.

VO: To relax, appreciate, explore, and get in touch with what really matters.

VO: Our vacation time, is the most important time we have.

VO: Make the most of your travel.

VO: With more value. More freedom. More rewards.
VO: RBC Avion

Attachments:

You must be logged in to view attached files.

[Shmuel]

Upload MP3 files, that way we can hear them and respond right away.

[Shmuel]

Sound quality is top notch. You need to put a bit more feeling in the reads. For example, with the last sentence in NetJets, you just read about Eastern Europe, but it’s an example of being in hutz-pluz, and you feel out of touch. You need to read it like the listener is on the Moon, or something uber far out like that, and then contrast it with the end of the sentence. Also with Bob Ross, you need to really convey that this guy had a really sweet voice (pipes), and a really cool hair-do. You’ve got to be Bob Ross’ No.1 fan.

[Shmuel]

Pleasant voice, important subject matter (just my opinion, though). I would put a bit more emotion in the end. There is quite a bit of an echo in the recording. Sounds like the space does not have enough sound abatement, not sure.

[Author]

Replies