[samsheeks]

great enthusiasm and connection to the script! I can hear that your room needs some treatment. It was a bit echo-y and I can hear some static or so from your equiptment.

[samsheeks]

Sound is good. I can hear a bit of room noise. And your words got a little mushy at some points.

[samsheeks]

I can hear some echo in your recording. I would work on upgrading your space or equipment.

[samsheeks]

These were great! Keep up what you’re doing. Good understanding of script and intention.

[samsheeks]

Great work! I can hear you trying to pronounce things clearly – keep it up! I think it will keep getting easier!

[samsheeks]

The sound quality is really great! And totally believable “mom” voice. The thoughts felt a little choppy at points and that was distracting, especially in the first line. Maybe work on connecting thoughts and driving the through-line.

[samsheeks]

You have a perfect voice for these types of projects. But I think you can work on making your sentences flow a little more. It sounded a bit too rehearsed at points. And on the Trump ones, I think you could have gone further with the assertiveness.

[samsheeks]

Great tone and pacing, and great casting for your voice. I wanted the tagline to feel a little more personal and less “sales-y”.

[samsheeks]

You have a great voice for cars and beer! Great work. I wanted a little more dynamics in the Sam Adams one. I love the “manly” feel but it felt a little all one note.

[samsheeks]

The sound is really great! Can definitely tell you have a good set-up. And I can picture the character very clearly. It felt a little slow and the emphasized words in the last sentence felt a bit awkward.

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