[Robert Broussard]

Good read!

[Robert Broussard]

That was good Mary, I like out you varied it up to be more conversational.

[Robert Broussard]

Thanks Kathy, I think so too.

[Robert Broussard]

Thanks for the advice. I like the different approach you suggested. I will try that.

[Robert Broussard]

Mary good effort. It does sound more like your reading. Try to make more conversational talking to a friend.

[Robert Broussard]

I think this was good overall, but maybe a little more energy spread in key parts of the read. Good job!

[Robert Broussard]

I like the pace and tone. This fits your voice too! good work.

[Robert Broussard]

That was good and I think your approach was correct. good job

[Robert Broussard]

Mary,

That was good. I think the pace could have been a little faster. The last was sentence really was natural and flowing. Keep up the good work.

[Robert Broussard]

lol, that would be a stretch for sure. But thanks!!😊👍

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