[Robert Broussard]

Thanks Mary, I should be getting close to do a demo.

[Robert Broussard]

I put together a new script as possible on my Demo. Any feedback will be appreciated. Thanks

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[Robert Broussard]

Thanks Mary, I have been out of the loop on my day job for a while. Just started up again today. Appreciate it.

[Robert Broussard]

I liked best in this order 2,3 1. 2 seemed to flow with the conversation the best. When you list the spa, children’s program etc, try to hit certain words a little better to emphasize a little better. Other than that a very good effort and interesting twist on reads.

[Robert Broussard]

Mary,
I had to agree with Darlene. 1 and 3 are better reads that go with you voice. Good job varying your tones. It seems like your voice volume is lower than it should be. Hope that helps.

[Robert Broussard]

Attached is my first read in a while. I appreciate any feedback or suggestions. Thanks

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[Robert Broussard]

Your performance and sound quality are really good. The script really fits with your voice as well. Hope that helps.

[Robert Broussard]

That was a good read. I like the pace and the laid back tone in your voice.

[Robert Broussard]

Nice read Mary, good pace and tone variance. You are progressing nicely.

[Robert Broussard]

Good work, impressive how you can blend the characters together.

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