[Robert Broussard]

Daniel, Good job! Nice pace and consistent tone.

[Robert Broussard]

That was good. Very conversational changing tones. Good job!!

[Robert Broussard]

Any feedback is well appreciated. Thanks

Justin Boots (Pecos Red)
Hi, I’m Pecos Red, for Justin Boots. Ever heard the term: “All Hat and no cattle”? That’s the problem with a lot of boots – I know. Sounds weird; but the thing of it is that most boots don’t do the same things your feet do, like expand – and – contract when you take a step.
Most boots are rigid, which is why your “dawgs commence to barkin’” and get all swole up, from yer boot-heels
a wanderin’….
At Justin Boots, our technology is a simple i.d. (idea) that comes right out of the way your foot works.
It’s how we build ever’ boot we make.
So’s it expands – and flexes the way your foot does when it’s out riding the range, or just boot-scootin’ out at Billy Bob’s.
For Justin Boots, I’m Pecos Red, remindin’ ya:
Justin Boots Quality – It’s a DANG good thing.
– And, never kick a cow chip on a hot day!

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[Robert Broussard]

I like. Your voice sounds to me something that would draw a kids interest. good job.

[Robert Broussard]

I redid this taking some advice from peers. Any feedback is appreciated. Thanks
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What will your family do then?
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[Robert Broussard]

Thanks, I am going to try this and do again. But not rush it either. I appreciate it.

[Robert Broussard]

Thanks Tim for the feeback. Using the rate calculator that should have been on average 26 seconds. I was squeezing it in trying to get under 30 secs and failed. 32 seconds was my best time. If I would have read it properly for me it would have been more like 40s. I try to speed things up to work on talking faster. I am generally a slow talker. I appreciate your feedback.

[Robert Broussard]

That was good! Your voice and tone was just right for this read. 👍

[Robert Broussard]

Hello, I recorded twice in a little different tone. I appreciate all feedback. Thanks!

Life Insurance.
Life insurance. It isn’t for the people who die, it’s for the people who live. Are you prepared? Without insurance, your financial plan may be just a savings and investment program that dies when you do. What will your family do then? An insurance agent or other financial professional can help you create a plan that will provide for the people you love after you’re gone. To learn more, call 1-800-LIFE-777 or visit our website at http://www.LifeLine.org

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[Robert Broussard]

Good effort. I think 2 & 3 were more conversational. But all were good.

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