Sherry, very good effort. I really liked the first one. Your voice, pace and tone was well suited for that script. The second was not bad but maybe the pace could have slowed a tad bit and your voice could be a little more relaxed. Hope this may help.
Good read, your matches material quite well, diction and clearness is good too. I like the pacing as well. It is somewhat conversational, but stills sounds like your are reading more than just speaking. Overall good work, keep it up! Hope this helps.