[radioguy]

You have a very appealing tone but remember that this is voice acting so you need to pause with punctuation and vary your emphasis on certain phrases. Use your energy to make the copy come alive in your VO.

[radioguy]

Very good overall but I think you could make it more natural sounding and less like a lesson. Keep up the good work.

[radioguy]

Your Almond Breeze delivery was much more smooth. Good job. Keep working with your coach for more tips.

[radioguy]

Hi Max. Great voice and decent delivery but you are parsing (pausing where there is no punctuation). Not a terribly bad thing but it interferes with the smooth delivery of the copy. Keep up the good work.

[radioguy]

Again.

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I fixed the errant files and append them here. Gene

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[radioguy]

Thanks Sylvanie. The speed is due to many years of live radio announcing.I’m working on it to become a better VO guy.

[radioguy]

Hi, I’m Gene Manning – new to the forum and happy to hear from you. Thanks for your input.

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