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Dear Nikka,
You have a friendly, clear voice that I want to listen to! However, if I had to criticize I would say your pacing started great and then became a bit choppy and you sound a little disconnected from the copy, less reading it and more helping your friend or someone else. I like lead in’s they help me. Thank you for putting yourself out there and look forward to hearing more from you.

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Hi AnnellaKaine,
I think you voice can be perfect for e learning or telephony it sounds crisp and authoritative. I would only suggest to connect with the copy with a clear image in your mind. Lead in’s help as well I look forward to hearing more of you too!

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Hi BJ,
Excellent work! I really like both of your reads. I like your voice, it sounds friendly yet authoritative and I like your pace, volume and tone. I only suggest you try to get a couple of totally different versions of these reads recorded because you could be asked to do this. Great work.

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Mary, thank you I appreciate your comments

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Hello forum of truth!
Please take a listen and offer a little of your insight and I will be happy to read yours and give feedback plus on 6 other people thank you. signed keeping it moving. The read is a well known one from the Edge script library. Cosmos

Welcome to the planet earth. A place of blue nitrogen skies, oceans of liquid water, cool forests, soft meadows; A world positively rippling with life. From the cosmic perspective, it is, for the moment, unique. The only world on which we know with certainty that the matter of the cosmos has become alive, and aware. There must be many such worlds scattered through space, but our search for them begins here, with the accumulated wisdom of the men and women of our species, acquired at great cost, over a million years.

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Hi Thomas,
your sound definitely sounds authentic in the nike ad and your delivery had good tempo, pretty good man. Negative thoughts had a solid authoritative sound with little affect, my only critique would be to add a little more empathy in your opening phrase, but I liked it. Good luck

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Hello Forum,
I hope everyone here is doing there best and working towards their goals of being a fabulous voice actor! I submitted this to the contest this month, any thoughts from folks in here will be very appreciated! Sketchers Fitness AppWelcome to Walk Away the Pounds. I’m <your first name> and I’ll be your audio guide.

I’m so glad you’re walking with me today. You know, this one mile walk is the perfect way to get started and be introduced to what this walking system is all about. It’s also a nice short workout for you.

Now, are you ready? Let’s walk! The warmup is very gentle and it really does prepare for the brisk walking that’s coming later on.

First of all, I’d like to review the four basic steps in our walk system.

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Hello and please check this read out and give me some critique, I will be happy to check yours out too, 🙂

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Nikka,
I enjoyed your read! you have a nice authenticity to your voice. I would only say that sibilance is noticed throughout and try less pausing and more musicality in your voice. Good luck!

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thank you, I felt that uncomfortable pause as well. I’ll blow through it a little better. 🙂

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