[Nikka Kowidge]

This is a great read. Your voice fits the subject well and you sound very knowledgeable. I think you might consider a bit slower pace during the more medically dense portion of the piece to ensure the listener can keep up as they digest the material.

[Nikka Kowidge]

Hazaro, these are great! I love the pace and conversational tone for the cereal one. Your voice and tone are perfect for the cat food too; for that one I think you can slow the pace a bit.

[Nikka Kowidge]

Mark, great reads! Your voice is right on especially on the Freshly one. For Sesame Place I really liked how you emphasized certain words; I think you can slow the pacing on this one a little especially on the back half of the read.

[Nikka Kowidge]

Great reads! The pace and tone are right on, I love the intonation on “happy thanks-grilling!” My one thought is to hit the last “t” on words like “beat” especially when they end the sentence.

[Nikka Kowidge]

Logan, that’s a great read! I like the emphasis on words like nasty toxins and visibly whiter. The pace quickens a bit during the second half of the read, you might consider taking it a tiny bit slower.

[Nikka Kowidge]

Hi everyone! I’m uploading two practice narration reads for feedback please! I’m working on pace, conversational style and flow. Any tips? Thank you so much for listening!

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