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Hi Sarah, I like the energy of your voice! I think if you eliminate the pauses after “waffles” and “takes” and “home,” it will be smoother. Be mindful of the up inflection on “waffles”, which tends to make it sound more like a question. Nice job.
Hi Touzet,
This was a wonderful read! I don’t have any comments to give you. The music definitely complemented your read. Excellent Job.Hi All! Thank you for any feedback you can provide.
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Acura. Everything we ever imagined. And then some.Hi Brandon – I was thoroughly scared by the Haunting Tale read – your voice was consistently in character. I think the Speed Velocity read was influenced by your Haunting read, in that the way you emphasized the words in Speed Velocity almost came across kind of scary. You might want to try different ways to emphasize or clarify words, or a different emotion. I think you have great depth in your voice naturally that doesn’t need much effort to bring it out.
Hi Jimmy, this is a nice and pleasant-sounding read. I could kind of hear an up-down inflection pattern throughout, so maybe be more selective with the words you choose to emphasize. You have good personality throughout, but perhaps it could be a little more conversational. All in all, you’re going in a good direction. Nice job!
Hi Don,
I like the certainty of the Aetna read, but I would eliminate the pauses so that it doesn’t get too choppy. The first part of the first sentence had a downward inflection at the comma plus a pause.
I liked the Sports Pilot Shop a lot. It really flowed, with no obvious pauses. I think you may have said “aromatics” instead of “aeronautics”? I could totally hear this announcement over the PA system in a store… while I shop for pilot stuff (just kidding!) Good stuff. Keep it coming.Hi All,
Thanks for any feedback you are willing to provide! Hopefully this won’t be cut off at the end, like all my other postings.
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Thank you for posting so many samples! I listened to the Hershey spot. My overall suggestion is try to be more relaxed when you read – right now it sounds like you are being very careful with reading each sentence. There are quite a lot of pauses throughout, so try to imagine saying the words to one person, and see if that makes it flow more and sound more natural. This ia a good start! Nice job.
