Really good… great if this were an audition submit both takes… you have range and both are so different great acting to be able to change it up awesome character read.
More practice for a narration/documentary demo would love your feedback! Thanks all
Welcome to the planet earth. A place of blue nitrogen skies, oceans of liquid water, cool forests, soft meadows; A world positively rippling with life. From the cosmic perspective, it is, for the moment, unique. The only world on which we know with certainty that the matter of the cosmos has become alive, and aware. There must be many such worlds scattered through space, but our search for them begins here, with the accumulated wisdom of the men and women of our species, acquired at great cost, over a million years.
Hey Brian, I think it is warm and similar in vibe and tone to the reference video… I would really hit a little harder (safeguarding you, your businesses, and your assets.) Also the tagline at the end (More Powerful, More Pelco) could be a little stronger. Good Luck!! You got this! Marty R.
Hey superLuke, need more info about your studio to really try and diagnose the problem. Basements can be great spaces to work in, but like any space they need acoustic treatment. That might be what’s needed some thick moving blankets what ever can deaden the room. Also in the recording there is some clipping distortion when you are at your loudest part of the script. Setting your levels a little lower and or adding a little compression to even out the dynamics can help. Great performance though. Hope this may help.
Hey great read pacing was nice, interpretation of the copy was on point only criticism I have is the sound quality could be a little better, but you made me want to travel again. 😉
Hey all just looking for constructive criticism Thanks;
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