[monibr16]

Thank you so much for taking another listen/feedback Mary!

[monibr16]

Hello guys,
Here’s a some commercial practice, all feedback welcome. Thank you!

Berry Burst
Thank you for calling General Mills. While we connect you with someone who can help, let’s talk about Cheerios and fruit!… Yeah you heard that right! Fruit, real fruit! It’s Berry Burst Cheerios. Wish you had same while on hold?

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[monibr16]

This was GREAT! It just flowed right out.

[monibr16]

Hey everyone! I gave my last commercial another try with the feedback given. More enthusiasm being the main adjustment. Please let me know how I did! Thank you.

Trendi.com
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[monibr16]

Katelyn this is extactly that. Great job!

[monibr16]

Hello!

This is a practing recording for my coaching session, using my phone. Focusing on my:
-mico-pauses
-workable lead-ins
-point of view/audience clear

And all other feed back welcome, thank you so much!

Trendi.com
Trendi.com. It’s the #1 shopping site for top name brands at up to 75% off. Great style, great value and everything ships free. Trendi.com. Everything you love, for less.

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[monibr16]

Hey Katelyn! You’re a great story teller. I could tell you knew exatctly what you were talking about and led the listener well. I did hear a pause that didn’t flow “she was born” you almost sounded like you lost your place. But besides that very nice job!

[monibr16]

So believable and the pacing was great!Nice job Robert!

[monibr16]

Hey Touzet! This was amazing! All of it. Very belivable. This character/genre is perfect for your voice!

[monibr16]

Great Job Mary! Good timing and very clear. But maybe connecting to the messege of the piece. It seems like an exciting moment. Maybe add a smile here and there and see how that feels? But over all nice and controlled!

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