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This was such a great story time read. SO much variety with the character voices. I would just say take more time with the rhymes. But I was entertained the whole time!
Hello guys,
Here’s a some commercial practice, all feedback welcome. Thank you!Berry Burst
Thank you for calling General Mills. While we connect you with someone who can help, let’s talk about Cheerios and fruit!… Yeah you heard that right! Fruit, real fruit! It’s Berry Burst Cheerios. Wish you had same while on hold?Hey everyone! I gave my last commercial another try with the feedback given. More enthusiasm being the main adjustment. Please let me know how I did! Thank you.
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This is a practing recording for my coaching session, using my phone. Focusing on my:
-mico-pauses
-workable lead-ins
-point of view/audience clearAnd all other feed back welcome, thank you so much!
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Trendi.com. It’s the #1 shopping site for top name brands at up to 75% off. Great style, great value and everything ships free. Trendi.com. Everything you love, for less.Hey Katelyn! You’re a great story teller. I could tell you knew exatctly what you were talking about and led the listener well. I did hear a pause that didn’t flow “she was born” you almost sounded like you lost your place. But besides that very nice job!
