[monibr16]

Wow! This was so good! So believable, I feel like you worked there and could completely help me find what I need. You did drop some of the endings of words. But great job overall!

[monibr16]

Great read! It definitely had conversational moments, but I feel like you can be even more specific with your audience of choice.I noticed the echo as well, but thats an easy fix. Good job overall!

[monibr16]

Good evening everyone!
Submitting another commercial read for coaching session, all feedback welcome. Thank you 🙂

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[monibr16]

Great energy Luke. I would just say slow donw a big with transitioning sentences. You smushed a few of the starting words together, like “in other words”. But besides that the pacing was great for a educational read!

[monibr16]

I was jamming from the beginnigng Mary! Great song choice paired with your voice. You also kept the energy up through out, and ended on a high note. Well done

[monibr16]

Thank you Luke!

[monibr16]

Hello everyone,
Looking for feedback on my commercial practice. Lead ins, and everything, also if the mic sounds “too hot”. Thank you!

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[monibr16]

Hello everyone,
Here’s another practice run for my coaching sessions. I’m in my closet haha but all other feedback is welcome, thank you!
Monique

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[monibr16]

Hello everyone,
Here’s another practice run for my coaching sessions. I’m in my closet haha but all other feedback is welcome, thank you!

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[monibr16]

Great read! Mic sounds awesome. But I do hear a little echo in some areas. Overall great!

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