[Joe Slade]

I really enjoyed your voice and the soothing quality you put into this read. The read came across to me as soothing and somber. I think I would like to hear a bit more energy and voice inflection even though the topic itself is so serious. Keep up the great work!

[Joe Slade]

Hey Steve, I enjoyed listening to this read! You sound very conversational throughout. I noticed a few micro pauses during your read-through. Smoothing those out should help improve the overall flow. Keep up the great work!

[Joe Slade]

Great read here Colton! To my ear, the pacing seemed just a bit rushed but otherwise very well done.

[Joe Slade]

Hey Jeff, great work on these reads! I enjoyed your pacing and felt both reads had an almost musical quality making them easy to listen to. Both these reads also felt like they were being delivered by a knowledgeable and trusted source. Nicely done!

• This reply was modified 2 years, 1 month ago by Joe Slade.

[Joe Slade]

Hey Samsheeks!
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts on these reads here. I really appreciate your notes on dropping tone and adding a bit of wonder/excitement in reads where that extra energy is such a good fit. Great feedback all around!

[Joe Slade]

Hey Jaljr! Thanks so much for the great feedback here. I liked your mention of a “wide-eyed feel” for both reads. 🙂

[Joe Slade]

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[Joe Slade]

Hello Feedback Forum,

I’m currently working on my narration demo and would love some feedback on these two sample script reads.
Does my read sound conversational?🤔 ( I’m not working from a professional home studio yet, so I’m not quite ready for any technical feedback )

Thanks so much for taking the time to listen and share your thoughts.

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