[mkell755]

Thanks Robert Broussard! I will work on not being monotone. In my head I think I’m being too up and down / animated, but I guess I can vary it more to make the read better. Thanks!

[mkell755]

Thanks Robert Brossard, I would like to avoid sounding like I’m reading; will work on those tips. Thank you!

[mkell755]

Thank you katelyndawnvo! Yes, I’ve been told I do the uptalk or valley girl thing where it sounds like a question mark instead of a sentence; so I definitely need to work on that. Thank you for your specificity! I really appreciate it. 🙂

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[mkell755]

Hello all! Looking for any and all criticism for upcoming commercial demo – thank you!

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SuperLuke – really liked the grit in your voice, and I was completely picturing the scene – dark and forboding in my mind. Very good!

[mkell755]

Thank you kfvoice! I will work on the clicking sound and the word emphasis. Thanks!

[mkell755]

Hi Katelyndawnvo – nice read! I liked the lightness in your voice, very pleasant and uplifting to listen to. The text flowed and made me curious to know more about skiing at Wintergreen. Great job!

[mkell755]

Hi kfvoice – nice job on the AMEX commercial. It sounds very smooth and believable. I feel that your voice could put people at ease when on hold, which can be stressful, meaning that this type of work would be good for you. Good job!

[mkell755]

Hi all! I’m posting a read for feedback in prep for my commercial demo – thanks for any and all comments!

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isabrandon30 – Sounds really good and believable, I wanted to listen to more of what you are teaching, enjoyed the easy conversational tone. Good job!

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