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Hi Svenbot! I liked this read – very nice and upbeat and your voice is well-suited for this type of commercial. Good job!
Mary
Hi Katelyn – very good read! Sounds very believable for the add for your voice. Great tone, pitch and pauses at the right times, and you definitely were invested in the piece. Good luck tomorrow! You’ll do great!
Mary
Hi Laura, thanks for the feedback! I will work on the unnecessary pauses and choppiness, good points. More smiling during the read too is good. Thanks again!
Mary
Hello all! I’m looking for any and all feedback here to my daily recording. This was recorded on my phone, so this is just for practice. Trying to sound authentic for this sort of commercial. Thank you!
Mary
Balance Bar
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Mary
Great reads swy619! For script 1 I heard what sounds like genuine interest in our planet, and effective pleading with people to recycle. Good tone, pace and clarity.
For script 2, I heard a nice smiling tone in your voice, which was very effective for this read. Really good job!
Mary
Hi Bergtravis – good genre for your voice, and appropriate enthusiasm for a training script. Good job!
Mary
Hi Bergtravis! I really liked this read – your voice seems to really fit the baseball genre. Good pace, tone and pitch.
Mary
Hi Bergtravis – I liked this read. Good pace and emphasis on the appropriate adjectives describing the house. Good job!
Mary
