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Hi Burdahgirl! Good read! You have a nice smooth voice for this type of read, it’s well-suited for your voice! The sound sounded good, but I am not yet on an upgraded studio setting.
Mary
Hi Holly! Good read! Very good flow, clarity and natural pacing throughout, also good variation of emphasized words too – well done!
P.S. I actually visited Hobby Lobby today and it was crazee with Christmas shoppers! 🙂
Mary
Hi Chas – good read! I like the deep, calm tone of your voice and agree that it is a good fit for this script. The pacing and flow was good. Starting with “But they were all deceived…” the script becomes much darker / more serious (I’m agreeing with Alexis here too), I would think you should try a more somber / warning tone from that point of the script to the end – you are setting the stage that explains the struggle between good and evil that is the basis of the story. I think it could sound a lot more theatrical to get the point across. Good read!
Mary
Hi Alexis! This sounds really nice and smooth. The pacing was great and the emphasis on several words throughout was great. Great clarity in your voice too – very good!
Mary
Hi Bhodson! First of all, welcome! It sounded really good! You have a nice, quiet tone that is good for this genre. It flowed in a good conversational way. The pacing was good. Keep it up!
Mary
Hi Brian – good reads! For the Canine Cancer read, it was spot on. Very good flow, tone, pace and clarity. For the Toyota read, also very good, natural delivery. It sounded like you added a couple of words before 2021 – “the all new 2021…”? I realize this is for practice, just something I noticed. Great job!
Mary
