[mkell755]

Hi Sarah, very nice! I could hear some plosives but not noticeable enough to point out. Really good tone for the script and very natural sounding. Nice!

Mary

[mkell755]

Hi Jbach, really nice! I really like the warmth and deep tone of your voice. It is very smooth and comforting. Really good clarity and pacing for both scripts, and good emphasis on words throughout both. Very good!

Mary

[mkell755]

Hi Andrea, very nice! It sounds nice and with good energy and inflection on words throughout, and would be a good read for kids. Good job!

Mary

[mkell755]

Hi Artyom123, good read! I think it sounded like you were concerned and connected tp the script. I heard “We’re” instead of “We’ve”. Keep up the good work!

Mary

[mkell755]

Hi everyone! It’s been a bit since I’ve posted. Currently working to get my recording levels right so I can record my first demo. Any and all feedback is welcome. This is one script read 4 ways. Which one do you like or not like? Thank you!!

Mary

International Coffees
As soon as Colette threw the cup she realized her mistake. She could live without Jean Pierre, but that was her last cup of French Vanilla Café. International Coffees

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[mkell755]

Thanks for the feedback John! I tried this one many times before picking the top two. Super short script but so many ways to read it. Trying to find the line of appropriate energy, enthusiasm and naturalness for this type of script without being too over the top. Thanks again!

mary

[mkell755]

Thanks for the feedback Robert! Appreciate it.

Mary

[mkell755]

Hi Dante, very nice! I really like your nice deep voice and warm delivery – great clarity and pacing. I like scripts 1 and 3 best for you. The second script felt more like you were reading to me, not sure why that was exactly, maybe just more emphasized enunciation than the other two? The other two sounded more natural and with good inflection levels. Keep up the good work!

Mary

[mkell755]

Hello all! I’m looking for any and all feedback here – same script read 2 slightly different ways. Which do you like better and why? Thanks!

Mary

HGTV – Designer Challenge
One Room in desperate need of a makeover. Three possible solutions. Which would you choose? Designer’s Challenge. Coming up Next. Only on HGTV.

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[mkell755]

Hey Christy – great work! So good to see you here! Great work here! Your voice is so nice and warm, and it fits this genre so well! Keep up the good work. Very good!

Mary

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