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Hi Chris,
Nice voice!
ACS – I would suggest more conversational, adjust the pitch, relax a little and connect with that type of audience who struggle with this habit. A little less emphasis on 50 million. It sounds like you loss some breath during the sentence …toll it takes on health and longevity. Let the copy breathe, move punctuation around so it sounds more natural.Ziploc – good read. I would suggest here also to relax just a little and speed up the read just a tad. Try a lead-in, who are you telling about these ziploc bags? Think about, is this how you would tell them this.
Hi Arin!
Both reads have great energy and the type of energy you give matches the scripts well. For AMEX I would suggest the pace to flow just a little more. It already sounds good but I think to make it even more conversational, give it a little more flow. For six flags – try tightening up the lines. eliminate some of the pauses. Think about when you are speaking, you may not always pay attention to the punctuation marks. So try that and compare the reads.
Hello Jimmy!
I listened to advil and it is a nice read. I would suggest the pace to be tighter and more connected. Who is your audience? lean into connecting with them and how great of a pain relief that advil can be for them.Hello Bruce!
Both reads have great tone. the student loan pacing was on target, not too fast or slow. It was just right for the information presented. The pacing allowed the reader to understand the information all while sounding conversational. The Jackson P*****k did sound more like reading rather than conversational.Hi Mary!
The reading is smooth and flows well without getting lost in the story. Also good tonal shifts as needed and highlighting keys words in the passage.
