Mary Werntz

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  • in reply to: Feedback Forum #70208
    Mary Werntz
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    Nice work! Your voice has a great announcer quality and the reads are very smooth. It might be fun to play with range and little characterization in the About Horror piece to make the tone slightly spooky.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #70207
    Mary Werntz
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    Recording quality sounds good to me, except that an occasional plosive is too strong. Your voice has a really nice resonance. Keep up the good work!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #70205
    Mary Werntz
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    Hi there! I’ve created this recording as if it were an audition with a slate and two reads. I imagined that the instructions were “friendly neighbor, slightly sarcastic”. I’d love feedback on the tone and variety of the two takes. Thank you!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #69889
    Mary Werntz
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    Hello! This recording flows nicely while hitting the right emphasis and variation. Great work!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #69888
    Mary Werntz
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    Hi Anne-Marie! Great work on these! Your voice is very soothing and easy to listen to. You sounded most at ease in the Dublin script which flowed the best from my perspective, so maybe you could play with a more relaxed, conversation read on the other two. And I know you’re still working on the home studio, but the audio quality sounds excellent to me!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #69887
    Mary Werntz
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    Your voice has a wonderful resonance and is a good match for this script. The music selection suites the piece nicely and the volume is suitably balanced between the two. Great work!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #69884
    Mary Werntz
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    Hello! I’d love to get some feedback on these two reads. For Vanguard, I’m working on a strong and confident tone with a subtext of warmth and trustworthiness. And for Westin, my focus keeping the flow moving throughout without rushing. Thank you, Forum friends!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #69466
    Mary Werntz
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    Hi Mary! This piece flowed nicely without a lot of those pauses that you’re trying to avoid. The only pause I caught was at the very beginning after “Gertrude Kasebier”. It’s very slight, though, so great job overall.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #69465
    Mary Werntz
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    Hi Zhenee! You have a very kind, gentle sound. You did a great job with these and I think you’d be well-suited for anything geared towards children as well.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #69434
    Mary Werntz
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    Hello! I’m looking to get some feedback – specifically on tone in these two commercial pieces.Thank you!

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