Logan DFD

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  • in reply to: Feedback Forum #77888
    Logan DFD
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    Good work on your reads! You have a great voice!

    Something I noticed was that you had plenty of mouth sounds through the two commercials. Drinking lots of water can sometimes help with that. Also, you might want more variation in your pitch. I noticed this because I have problems with that too.

    Best of luck!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #77848
    Logan DFD
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    Great reads!

    In both the Cosmos read and the Wonder Years read, your voice sometimes lacked a bit of variation in pitch, which can lead to a monotone delivery. I know this because I’m struggling with it too. Otherwise, you have a great soft, relaxing tone. Keep it up!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #77847
    Logan DFD
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    Sorry, what I meant was Pitch, not tone. Do I have a good variation in pitch?

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #77845
    Logan DFD
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    I’m hoping to get some feedback on my natural delivery. Do I have enough variation in my tone? I’m trying to fight against my monotone voice.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #75089
    Logan DFD
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    Hope to get some feedback on my natural delivery. How does it sound? Thanks!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #75088
    Logan DFD
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    Great read! Really enjoyed it (especially since I have an affinity for The Legend of Zelda myself). The only feedback I could recommend is you might want to play with variation in the pitch, including the end of your sentences. It’ll make it sound more varied, like you’re talking to someone. Keep up the great work!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #74985
    Logan DFD
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    I’d like some feedback on my natural delivery. Thanks!

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    Because with each crisp, delicious bite, you can take comfort in knowing you’re protecting your family’s health.
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    (Click on the second file, the .m4a file. I accidentally put in the Logic Pro X file at first. Sorry.)

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #74881
    Logan DFD
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    Hope to get some feedback on my natural delivery. Thanks!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #74880
    Logan DFD
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    Sounds pretty good! I’d say that on the Blue from American Express read, try to end some of your sentences swooping upward (almost like asking a question). I think the same should go for the last sentence of the Kid’s Explorer Academy read. Otherwise, your delivery was great! Sounded like a commercial! Keep up the good work!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #74421
    Logan DFD
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    Hoping to get some general feedback on some recordings I’ve been practicing. Thanks!

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