[LindsayLaVelle]

I think your explanation of Liquidband was great. It was very clear and easy to follow. In the opening text, it took me a minute to understand what you were talking about. I think you could add a little pause before the brand name the first time you say it, and perhaps slow down that beginning section just a tad. The directions were very natural and sounded right in the pocket.

[LindsayLaVelle]

I’d love feedback, specifically on pronunciation, pace and tone. Thanks so much for taking the time to listen!

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[LindsayLaVelle]

I’m counting down to demo day. I’d love feedback on these 3 reads for a corporate narration script. Thanks!

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[LindsayLaVelle]

Hey community! I’m trying to narrow down some texts for my demo. Any feedback is appreciated. These were not recorded with professional equipment, so I realize the quality isn’t up to standard.

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[LindsayLaVelle]

Your voice/accent seem well suited for the Amtrak read. I heard more of the content with the second listen, so maybe either slow down a bit or emphasize the key words a bit more. I enjoyed it!

[LindsayLaVelle]

I’d love some feedback on this travelogue copy for my narration demo. Thanks!

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[LindsayLaVelle]

You managed to make telephony interesting! This comes across as friendly and upbeat. Nice!

[LindsayLaVelle]

Hey Thomas, I liked your Telsa read. I think you could take your time a bit more because, as someone unfamiliar with the script, I wanted to really hear all the details. Well done!

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