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Dictionary piece. Enjoy how you are a bit animated in telling the story at the beginning (to your students) and then the switch to the instructional teacher tone.

Cornetz University piece. Voice is knowledgeable and friendly. Your pacing makes the instructions easy to understand. Nice natural phrasing

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Nice pacing on the Clinic Cares piece. You were clear and concise.

Look Labs was so funny!! I pictured the entire scenario. Go goat dominance!

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You really convey the message as if you were having a conversation with a new employee. You can feel that you were honestly smiling and effectively portrayed Dunkin’s core values. Great job.

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In Atlanta Bread, your listing items had their own unique delivery which made the listener tune it. Nice!

The Horror piece was my favorite. The mellow tone at the beginning drew the listener in and then as you characterized the horror words with the character inflections you set the mood of the piece. Cudos!

Personally, I am not a big cereal fan so your enthusiasm was a little over the top for me but I did believe your family loves it. Sweet!

Trendi sounded more like a read. Do you have a fashionista friend that you can share that secret with?

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Thank you so much!

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Cudos for making a comic content script conversational. Seriously sarcastic which makes the piece believable. Well played.

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Here it goes, my first post on the Feedback Forum. Interested to know if it is authentic. All thoughts and tips welcome.

Me. Myself. My salad. Okay. This is it. This is the salad for me. The Grilled Chicken Caesar at McDonald’s. I am so into all the different kinds of lettuce and the cute little tomatoes. But what really shouts my name is all that warm grilled chicken. I drizzle on the low fat Newman’s Own all natural Balsamic Vinaigrette and I am one happy woman. Want to hear me go on and on about the crispy cobb or bacon ranch salad too?

I’m lovin’ it.

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You made me feel genuinely concerned for your friend in the eating disorder piece. I could picture you talking to a mutual friend in the school cafeteria.

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The message seemed to come across stronger with the FX. I am a novice in the editing process, but I could hear the difference. Nice read.

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Wow, you were able to take a squirmy subject and not make me feel grossed out. I was actually fascinated in the subject matter by your delivery. Cudos.

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