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Interested in your feedback on “the History Channel who would you be” from a female voice.

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Really enjoyed the voice characterizations. Overall, the pace and delivery were fast for me, therefore I missed some dialogue. Cudos on reading multiple characters.

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Nice blend of friendly and authoritative in your delivery.

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The PSA make me envision the dry eye character voice. I kept picturing him in your delivery. You took what could have been read super serious to that alter ego sarcastically torturing your mind. Liked the approach, I felt the internal pull. Nice.

Freshii spot I really enjoyed the flirty delivery … a little salsa fresa and …pop of pineapple.

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Mike. Thank you so much. Your feedback is always so helpful and much appreciated.

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Happy Tuesday! I know that you see a food trend in my scripts, LOL! So I thought I would throw in a poetic piece as well. All Feedback and critics are welcome and appreciated.

The House With Nobody in It – Poem by Joyce Kilmer
Whenever I walk to Suffering, along the Erie track
I go by a poor old farmhouse, with its shingles broken and black.
I suppose I’ve passed it a hundred times, but I always stop for a minute
And look at the house, the tragic house, the house with nobody in it.

Inside everyone is an incredible cook. Someone who can cook an amazing meal any night of the week.
Farm fresh ingredients… Step by step recipes…delivered to your door for 999 a meal,
Visit Blue Apron.com/Cook to get your first two meals free.

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Mike. Thank you so much! That makes total sense. Appreciate the tips. I am definitely going to re-record this weekend.

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Would like feedback on this commercial for Stop and Shop that I am considering for my demo. The commercial is about “lists” and I find “lists in scripts” a bit tough. So facing my fear. All feedback is welcome and appreciated.

STOP AND SHOP TV COMMERCIAL

We’ve all got one somewhere, scribbled on the back of an envelope, shouted from the kitchen, a note to self.
But your list is also an invitation, a plan, a promise. Each one is a snapshot of what and who we care about.
So next time you’re at Stop & Shop. Take a second look at what you’ve written.
And you’ll see It’s more than just a list.
Stop and shop feed the moment.

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City Care – Nice clear delivery good pacing

Lego – Wow amazing process on how legos are made. Lots of interesting content. The words “there are” sounded like “there arft”

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Baby Backpack – nice enthusiasm, believe you are a young mom whose life just got easier and you want to share the excitement.
Camary good characterization as the car.
Bombas like the sensitive tone in your voice.

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