[kellcbell87]

I think that’s it – thank you!

[kellcbell87]

I feel like something is a little off with this read I did. Any suggestions? Thanks in advance!

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[kellcbell87]

I think I nailed this one on the first try! What do you all think? Some night time baby music and bam!

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[kellcbell87]

The read comes off kinda pitchy in the beginning, but you got more balanced in pacing and tone as you continued. Try some lead in dialogue to help lead you in so you sound more nature from the start.

[kellcbell87]

Here’s the script!

American Express – Private Payments
Do you know me? Probably not. In my business, recognition is always important, but when I’m buying goods online, I prefer a little privacy. With Private Payments from American Express, I get the security of a unique number created for each business transaction I make. Because my private information is my business.

[kellcbell87]

Hey! I can’t pick a best take for this American Express spot that I’ve been practicing. Very minimally edited as I wanted to nail the whole thing in one take. Which one do you all like best and why? Thank you so much!

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[kellcbell87]

Great voice! Work on the pacing. There were a few micro-pauses that didn’t sound super natural. Nice take for minimal editing!

[kellcbell87]

I LOVE your personal care ad! Sounds wonderful – nice friendly tone, steady speed, very natural.
Newcast reel – it’s a bit cheeky/perky, more like a Radio Personality than a Newscaster. Maybe change the name on that one (Radio Personality)

[kellcbell87]

Hey there! Great energy in the read, but a bit over the top at times. Try to really find your character’s intention and that may help ground it more.

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