Keith Paul

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  • in reply to: Feedback Forum #89053
    Keith Paul
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    Hello everyone, can I please get some candid feedback on these two reads, i have uploaded. I would very much appreciate it. Thank you very much. these reads are narrations.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #88943
    Keith Paul
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    Hello Frank, all i can say is “Storyteller extraordinaire.”

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #88897
    Keith Paul
    Participant

    Hello, I tried listening for flaws, could not hear any. I read was very conversational, diction was right on point. the tone and delivery would keep the audience interested in the topic. Great Job.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #88896
    Keith Paul
    Participant

    Hi, your tone on the commercials is very warm, but the script was not conversational enough, it sounded like you are reading.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #88895
    Keith Paul
    Participant

    Thank you very much for your feedback, your point is well taken.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #88784
    Keith Paul
    Participant

    Hi, great read, I love the tone and interpretation of the script. I would have to agree with the “D” at the end of cold, it does need some attention.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #88783
    Keith Paul
    Participant

    Hi, nice read, on both. On the American cancer, there were two words that were difficult to pick up “Ask” and the word before “habit” i could not recognize that word at all.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #88781
    Keith Paul
    Participant

    Hi, the All state read, the volume was low and it made it difficult to understand some of the words, The Boarding pass volume waa better and was able to hear all of the words. The boarding pass matched what is heard when boarding at the airport.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #88777
    Keith Paul
    Participant

    Hello everyone, I’m back again looking for your feedback. I have uploaded two reads, please be as candid as possible. I really do appreciate your feedback

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #88571
    Keith Paul
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    Hi, on the home tour narration, sometimes your volume goes down very low that the meaning is lost.
    On the Yellow stone narration, the read was really good and inviting.

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