[Keith Paul]

Hello Rory, in the narration, at the beginning, everything before “daily lives” were difficult to understand. I thought the diction and pace was right on time.
On the commercial with “Navy Pier” it sounded like a narration more than a commercial. Probably some smiling would help change it some. Again the diction was great, i think the pace can be picked up a little for the commercial.

[Keith Paul]

Thank you very much for your feedback

[Keith Paul]

Hi, the volume on your recordings is way too low, could not make out what you were saying.

[Keith Paul]

Hi, Krista, explainer scripts can sometime be very tricky. your words are very clear, the scripts though, needs to be a bit more conversational.

[Keith Paul]

Hello, Weiss, your volume is very low, unable to understand what you are saying.

[Keith Paul]

Hello, I listened to both your reads, the diction is great, but it doesn’t have the conversational tone to it. they both sound as if you are reading.

[Keith Paul]

Hello Everyone, can I get some real candid critique of my narrations, As many critiques as possible. This will be greatly appreciated.

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[Keith Paul]

Thank you very much for the feedback, that is the kind of feedback I’m looking for.

[Keith Paul]

Hello, the echo is most prominent. What I did with my studio pace which was very inexpensive, I used moving blankets. I bougut them from U-Haul for $10.00 each and covered my walls. I lowered my ceiling to 7 feet and covered it also with moving blankets. I have a complete padded space, that is totally dead. works fine for me.

[Keith Paul]

Hello, I listened to your recording and I could not hear anything wrong technically. I am by no means an expert on this, but based on my little experience, it seems fine to me.

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