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    katelyndawnvo
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    And a second one! 🙂 This is a corporate onboarding narration for my upcoming demo as well. I think this is not my best work but it’s getting late lol! I am going for conversational, friendly, encouraging. Hope to be hitting this mark. Thank you! Also – there are quite a few plosives at the start of this – any tips for dealing with plosives?

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #61481
    katelyndawnvo
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    Good day everyone. Here is a piece for my narration demo I’m working on with my coach. This is a corporate explainer narration piece. I’m going for friendly, but this is still really important. I hope it sounds conversational. Let me know if it hits the mark. Thank youssss

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #61474
    katelyndawnvo
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    Fantastic work!! David is so great 🙂 I just got my demo back too. Congratulations on your new demo and new website!! I love your voice for documentaries.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #61473
    katelyndawnvo
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    Woohoo! This was great! #2 is right on the money, nice work! I think the word “lush” could be milked a little bit more but this is fantastic! Makes me so sad I can’t go to Mexico this year.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #61471
    katelyndawnvo
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    Thank you all for your encouraging feedback! I agree, I think I will omit the “,” thank you!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #61470
    katelyndawnvo
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    You are most welcome Chas! 🙂

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #61421
    katelyndawnvo
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    Hey guys. Here is a read for my narration demo. This is one of those celebrity bios that you’d watch on access Hollywood or on a celebrity youtube channel. I’m imagining talking to my little niece who hasn’t heard of Taylor Swift before. I hope it comes across as engaged, and like I’m enjoying telling someone who hasn’t heard about TS. Let me know if this is hitting the mark or missing it. Thanks! After listening back I think they are both pretty much the same… lol

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #61420
    katelyndawnvo
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    Hey Chas! Nice to hear your voice again. Nice work on these reads. I’d like to hear a couple of versions where you slow it down a little more and really savor these things while you are talking about them. I think that would help bring out the luxurious feel and paint the words like “seas brush dazzling white shores.” a little but more. I think your voice would be a nice warm and inviting option for something like this. Great job.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #61386
    katelyndawnvo
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    Hi Mary, I liked this read for you. You asked the question at the start very genuinely which isn’t always easy to do. I would like to hear a take where you read this a little bit faster-paced just to see how it would sound. Nice work!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #61371
    katelyndawnvo
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    Hi folks! Here is a script going on my narration demo. It’s a university video narration and I specifically have my younger cousin in mind and trying to see the things I’m saying as I’m saying them. Hoping to sound connected to the copy and like I’m talking to my cousin. Also really trying to avoid glottal stops – so many opportunities for those in this read. Any feedback is appreciated. I am uploading 2 reads.

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