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Thanks Robert, really appreciate your comment on #2 and will work on the energy for #1 too!

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Thank you so much for your feedback, was trying to have fun with sounding sultry for No. 1 and appreciate your suggestions for No. 2 in which I’ll practice 🙂

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Hi Mary, I liked both of your recordings, thought the first recording was more conversational and inviting. I liked the second recording too but was listening more to the music than your words.

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I’ve included 2 scripts for practice and feedback, any feedback is appreciated! 🙂

Sandals-In The Mood
What’s your mood?…13 Luxury Included resorts…4 Exotic Islands…ONE unforgettable experience…Sandals—The Luxury Included vacation…Call 1-800-Sandals or visit Sandals.com

Ziploc
Only Ziploc brand bags have a unique interlocking zipper to lock in freshness in a way no other bag can. When it comes out this fresh, you know it went in a Ziploc bag. Ziploc. We’ve got a lock on freshness.

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Hi Beckolin, I liked your pace and tone of your voice!

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Thanks Mary!

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Thank you so much for your feedback! You’re right I am not in a sound proof zone, will go to my closet next time! 🙂

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Hi! Lookingforward to your feedback on this Cheerios commercial.

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