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I liked the richness/tone of your voice and great emotion in the the ocean recording, it made want to be there too. Perhaps for the medical narration maybe add a little more inflection on key words, also your sound was great for both of the recordings.

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Hi! Looking forward to your feedback on the following, always grateful for your help! 🙂

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Hi Mary, What a great recording, good match for your voice! I liked your conversational and energetic tone, your pacing and sound was really good too!

And I found your comments on sound equipment, so helpful to know what you’ve been using and will check out Sweetwater too. And I will definitely sign up for the equipment class! Thank you!!! 🙂

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Hi Mara, I really liked the Delta/Tesla recordings as well, both natural and professional! Perhaps the diabetes one could have more inflection to make it more conversational?

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Thank you so much, I’ll be sure to keep the energy up at end/Purina pronunciation. 🙂

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Thank you so much for your feedback and suggestion for the first reading. I will definitely look for a USB mic too!

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Thanks Mary! I was trying to practice finding/hitting some key words so glad that there was some success! 🙂

I am just recording off of laptop speakers, do you have any suggestions on equipment?

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I really like the warmth in your voice! For the story telling, perhaps you could try adding more emphasis by hitting different words to capture more of the listener’s attention~

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