JTLeyba
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Good job on your practice! After listening to all three, I did feel that the fresshi read was a little much (put on), I suggests reading it with the same excitement but use the voice for the balducci’s as I personally feel that was your best one. The last one felt like you were trying to go too deep with you voice, try reading it again with the balducci’s voice. Other than that great job!
Amazing read! I would totally buy this product off of your Ad. What is your equipment set up? And did you edit the music yourself? If so what platform did you use?
Hello everyone! Just looking for some feedback on some practice Vo’s, much appreciated.
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I like it! Your voice is easy going and pleasant to listen too! Overall your diction and word stress was spot on, the only spots I felt you had trouble on were Customer-Driven (Slurred Driven) and your pleasant tone dropped off at world wide. Other than that good job! Good luck with your demo!
Great job practicing! Your diction was excellent and I could easily understand every word. My suggestions would be to ad a bit a more pep and excitement to your reading. Pretend like your telling your best friend about the latest new trend or product that you just found and love. Keep up the practice, your doing great!
Hello! I’m trying to practice my scripts for a new demo reel, any feedback help as I am a complete newbie. Please and thanks!
So, I don’t do character stuff, as such feel free to take what I say with a grain of salt.
I had some trouble understanding some of the accents, such as the first two and the dragon slaying and horse characters. In addition it felt like you lost some of the accents mid way through your performances, but maybe you did that on purpose as to show your range. For Example the “put the gun down and keep playing” guy. It sounded like he had something in his mouth (which was a nice touch) but lost it and got it back. Personally my favorites were the magician and the “weapons contracts” guys. They were clear, easy to understand. I think those two were your best out of the reel. But like I said I don’t do character stuff so take this feedback with a gain of salt.
Good Luck recording your demo! You got this!I like the Pedigree, as it was smooth, well paced, and accurately read. That said, I felt that the reading was a little flat, are you smiling as your reading? In the Uber one (also good) it sounded like you had more of a smile, especially when you talked about date night. But overall, good job!
