[Joseph Thompson]

Great feedback, thanks Mike!

[Joseph Thompson]

I’m working on material for my demo and need some input on how believable, relaxed and comfortable I sound. Is my diction clear enough, and do I enunciate so that all my words can be heard? Thanks for taking the time to give me some constructive feedback.

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[Joseph Thompson]

I like your pacing and your tone, but your voice sounds a little too “whispery” to be convincing that you’re a political pundit trying to get me to shift the way I approach my politics this election season. Great voice though!

[Joseph Thompson]

I also liked the Sesame Place theme park read, but it lacked the punch and excitement that a theme park would generate. Candidly, that may be easily fixed by the addition of background music, so, all-in-all I thought it was a nice read. You have a great voice for live announcements!

[Joseph Thompson]

I really liked your read on the Toyota job. Sounded natural and conversational (my coach tells me that’s the kind of voice that’s booking a lot these days)

[Joseph Thompson]

Hi there, and thanks for taking the time to give me some feedback. I’m working on pacing, flow, and enunciation, so I’d appreciate any constructive criticism that’ll help me improve my technique. Thanks in advance.

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