Jorjecat09
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Hi Everyone! Posting again for homework for the second time. I’m uncertain if I’m my own worst critic or if these recordings are decent. Please let me know your honest opinion. The first is Carnation Breakfast Essentials, Atlanta Bread Company and Pickeball.
Hi Stuart!! Thank you so much. I can’t thank you enough for such fantastic feedback. This has helped a great deal. I totally hear and agree with all of your critiques. I’ll pay more attention to my tone, annunciations and inflection. You’re the best! On to the next one
Trying this again with the conversion to MP3! Hi Everyone – This is my first time posting and actually hearing my recorded voice. Sending this in for homework. Totally looking forward to your honest feedback. The first is Peet’s Coffee, second is History Channel and the third is Honey Bunches of Oats. Thanks!
Oh wow thanks Andrea! I’ll try to figure out how to convert it to an mp3 and then repost. Thanks again
Your tone in the first and third read were a bit monotone. if you can elevate your voice or use a different cadence i think you’d be good to go! My favorite was the 2nd read. it gave a lot more energy and it was inviting
Hi Everyone – This is my first time posting and actually hearing my recorded voice. Sending this in for homework. Totally looking forward to your honest feedback. The first is Peet’s Coffee, second is History Channel and the third is Honey Bunches of Oats. Thanks!
Excellent read! Felt easy going with the right amount of energy without over doing it. Your tone of voice feels like a great big comfortable sweater. Fantastic job!
