[Johnwatkis]

Not sure why I said Greg. Wes@1972

[Johnwatkis]

Hi Greg,

You made some nice choices with inflection and you have a clear, resonant voice. At times it sounds as if you’re reading. I suggest a more conversational tone. This has more of a radio announcer feel.

[Johnwatkis]

Hi Jeff,

The first two reads had a good pace and you brought out some nuances in the sentences. It did sound more like a radio announcement, so I would pick someone to speak to so you can sound more conversational.

The last read lacked the “umph” of the first two. “Life is good” fell a bit flat for me.

[Johnwatkis]

Well done! Your higher range is pleasant, friendly, and inviting. Your pacing felt right and the overall quality of your recording was clean. There were two plosives in the margarita read that stood out to me. Other than that, no suggestions.

[Johnwatkis]

Hello RYoung,

Great resonance, pacing, and overall vocal quality. The read felt friendly and inviting. If I would suggest anything, it might be playing with your higher register when you finish a couple sentences. I’m nitpicking. That is all I would offer for “next time” with this read.

[Johnwatkis]

Hi Mary,

You have a pleasant tone and your voice is easy to listen to. There were some opportunities to add variety to the pace and pitch in a few sentences that would have changed the feel of both reads. In the Mercury read “One car recognizes that reality.” feels like it should be stated definitively. In Audio Associates, Listen sounds natural the second time you say it, but has no emotion the first time. You’re on the right track!

[Johnwatkis]

Hello All,

This is my first time posting to the feedback forum. I’m following through on my coaches instructions and seeking any feedback you’re willing to offer. Thanks in advance.

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