JohnFinn
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Hey peeps, a few more Edge practice scripts for feedback. Looking for feedback on tone- did it match the genre and what about pace? Thanks!
1. A Brief History of Time- Expanded
2. Anne E Casey Foundation
3. Podium 60wow- couldn’t get the edit to work quite right, sorry. update to the last paragraph- shouldn’t be there, the word isn’t in the script or read, I’m sure I was carrying that thought over from another post. Sorry for any confusion. ~John
hey there, great work overall! The pace was very good and the mouth noises were small. How close to the mic are you and do you have a wind sleeve or pop screen?
In the 2nd read- I really liked the pause and tone change for the “pause” and “stop” sections, it draws just the right amount of attention on there. I thought that maybe the phrases after that may have been rushed a bit as the pauses themselves kinda make you try to find your back to your original groove.
A couple words it sounds like you’re working to annunciate carefully, like “enthusiasts”, can be bit choppy around the read- keep working the annunciation and to make it fit smoothly with the rest of the read. I totally get the challenge and still working on many of those myself!
Nice job!
Thanks, Dante! Thank you for the comments on #3, I definitely intended to make that a bit more enthusiastic and will practice more to try and bring that out in the read.
Cheers!
John
Great reads! Variation and pitch was spot on with Always and Spotify. The first set of abc’s in Spotify- “-on your phone, your computer…” might need a little lift like the second set. Great work!!
Hey there VO peeps- a few practice rounds to try some vocal variation and working on editing in room noise at pauses. Please share your thoughts, thank you!
1. 2012 Extinction (Edge Script)
2. Diamonds (Edge Script)
3. Company Website Greeting (Edge Script)Hello- besides the missing phrase, a nice job getting emotion added in there with higher and lower pitched words/phrases. Keep an eye on pace, some phrases were faster than others. Nice job overall!
Hello- practice reads here, any feedback and suggestion are welcome. All reads are from the Edge Studio script library. Thank you!
