[joekett]

Hello. I’ve been working with Art Bruder and I’ve learned a tremendous amount about the VO biz. Please let me know your opinion on these you have some time.

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I’d appreciate any feedback.

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[joekett]

Hello – I’d appreciate reviews and comments on these items and how the home studio comes across. No need to be gentle. One is a Narration and two are commercials. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thank You.

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[joekett]

Hi Elz,
Listening to your voice, you are obviously young and adventurous to be working towards VO. I love seeing that. You read very well and have an intelligent sounding voice. My suggestion is that you try to read more like you’re speaking to your friends. Be like a smart the smart kid that makes all the other kids want to listen to you as I’m sure you do in real life. Also work a little or even a lot to find the best words to emphasize. You could learn a lot in an interesting class that David Goldberg does on winning in Auditions. It’s only 50 bucks but it’ll really get you some good direction. You’ve got great potential. As a business person, I’d like to hear a voice like that telling me about my products and services.
Good Luck
Joe

[joekett]

Nice voice, good read, great pace for the topic. A good Mic and a good sound studio, and you’re off to the races. Keep at ot.

[joekett]

I agree with the previous post. A bit rushed, but well read. I don’t know your natural voice, but if you could make ie more relaxed it would be great.

[joekett]

Good read on both. Relaxed, easy to listen to. I’d watch the quick pass over the T in the “sweet and ynmmy” Otherwise, nice.

[joekett]

Hello TT,
Good energy. You should work on your pronunciation in the Zeal recording. Make sure you pronounce the D and bring it down to a more natural, relaxed presentation.
Uber was much better.

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