[jmtarleton]

@mvacc Cool. Thank you. I often start loud and am trying to work on that. Thanks for the comment on the AMEX one too. (blessed hands emoji)

[jmtarleton]

Hello everyone! Here are a few commercial scripts from the library, uploaded for any feedback and comments you have. Very much appreciate the time and attention!

All best,

John

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Hello everyone! I am uploading a few takes here for commercial practice, and am grateful for any comments or suggestions.

Thank you kindly!

John

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Hello good people! Here are a few more commercial homework files. I very much appreciate comments and feedback you may have.

I will say this space (and neighborhood) are noisy, but I am working on some better treatment for the small room I use.

Many many thanks,

John

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Hello everyone, here’s a little more commercial homework. Please share any feedback you may have!

Many many thanks,

John

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Hello kind folks! Uploading a few takes of commercial reads I’m working on. I really appreciate the time and any feedback you have.

All the best,

John

PSA ON ENVIRONMENT

A key to reducing waste is to shop wisely and purchase only what you need

You can also buy household products with less packaging

And when it comes to food opt for loose produce

So reduce, then recycle the rest

The more you know

Aspen

At the gate the everyday vanishes

Here your thoughts are a little clearer

Your appetite for life a little sharper

This mountain, as captivating under summer flowers as it is under snow

Aspen is a one-of-a-kind resort

Unhurried Carefree And cozy like an Alpine Village under a starry night

Ambien

There is a rhythm to life

We sleep at night and wake in the morning

It’s the sleep cycle that helps keep us in a healthy balance

But for millions of Americans sleep doesn’t always come easily

For them there’s AMBIEN

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Thank you kindly for listening and for the suggestions, Bill!

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Hello everyone! I hope February is kind to you.

Here are a few narration homework scripts for review and feedback. I very much appreciate the help!

All the best,

John

Door County Fish Boil
Even people who don’t like fish, have been known to like this fish. That’s why a fish boil is a must-do experience when you visit Door County. It all starts with a blazing bonfire under a kettle of salted water. People circle around to warm themselves and take in the crisp smell. When the temperature is just right and the crackle of the fire is just loud enough, the boil master adds a basket of potatoes and onions to the kettle. A few crackles later, the mild whitefish steaks, fresh from Lake Michigan, are delicately lowered in. At just the right moment, kerosene is tossed into the fire, exciting the blaze and causing the water to boil over, dramatically carrying off the fish oil that has collected on top. The fish are pulled out and greeted with a generous drizzling of butter. Ladies and gentlemen, dinner is served.

AETNA
No matter where we live–when it comes to something as important as health care–we all want the best. That’s why AETNA and US HEALTHCARE have joined forces to create a partnership that will set a new standard for quality and caring. AETNA and US HEALTHCARE. Raising a standard for your town, for your family, and for you.

Advance Technology Inc.
Welcome to Advance Technology Incorporated and to the excitement and challenges of a growing business. As a new employee, your job is important to us. Your success is an important factor in the success of this company. This software is designed to offer you accurate information about company policies and procedures, benefit packages, performance reviews, training and education opportunities.

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Hello good people! I am posting a few more narration takes with different tones. As always, I appreciate any feedback you all have.

All the best,

John

Official Alaska Vacation Planning Video
This Official Alaska Vacation Planning Video is filled with plenty of breathtaking scenes. But more important, it’s loaded with all the information you need for planning a trip to Alaska. Like when to go, what to wear, and what to see. So if you’ve got Alaska on your mind, you’re going to love this video. Let’s begin with snow sports. This is definitely the place. For cross-country and down-hill skiing. For snow boarding, tobogganing, and even ice fishing.

Training Video
At the back of the machine, a basket is catching the finished product as its ejected. That final product will pass through visual, leak and resistance quality control inspections. The final product is loaded onto pallets and delivered to the Assembly Department for attachment to the battery can.

Nero – Intro
He was a perverse cross-dressing exhibitionist who had an incestuous relationship with his mother and married his step sister. He murdered members of his own family in fits of jealous rage. His cruelty, violence, and grotesque appetite for self-indulgence brought the Roman empire to the brink of financial and political ruin. And he viscously persecuted the christians. They would remember him as the ultimate embodiment of evil … the anti-christ.

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Hello and Happy almost New Year, good people! Here are three narration scripts with different tones I am trying out. I really appreciate the time and feedback.

All the best,

John

Animal Heroes
Not all heroes are human. Sometimes heroes bark, meow, or even grunt. They may be covered with fur, have curly tails, or live in an alley. We’re about to meet some real-life animal heroes. Each one of these heroes has performed an amazing rescue. Sometimes they even put themselves in danger to help others. We’ll meet a dog who rescues stray cats. A brave cat who saved her five kittens from a fire. A pig who got help for her owner who was having a heart attack. And a guide dog who led his owner down 71 flights of stairs when the World Trade Center was attacked.

Crime Drama Narration
Some crimes committed are so undeniably gruesome that they defy logic and have people asking questions, forever more. The case of Katherine Knight did just that. A woman who not only murdered in cold blood but, then, went on to commit the most despicable act after the brutal slaying.

Company Website Greeting
Meet Bob. Like 95% of car shoppers, he uses his computer, smartphone and tablet to shop for his next car. A few years ago, you could have reached Bob through traditional means such as Direct mail, TV or radio, and newspaper ads. Today, that simply isn’t enough.
According to Google – consumers visit 18 websites on average – before stepping into a dealership.

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